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作文指导英语经验之谈
【高考英语作文提分经验】善用非谓语动词
2018年05月08日
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   众所周知,作文中出现过多的简单句会给人单调乏味之感,句子与句子之间的关系也会显得松散;而文章中过多地出现复合句又显得累赘,读起来费劲。恰当地运用非谓语动词可以使文章结构更紧凑,表达更流畅。

   1.运用非谓语动词转换简单句 

  写作时,我们可以利用非谓语动词将两个简单句转换成较高级的表达方式。转换时可采用三步法。

   第一步:写出两个简单句。

   第二步:让句②作主句,用非谓语动词改写句①。 

   第三步:句①表示原因,其中的动词feel与主语I之间为主谓关系,故用现在分词短语作原因状语,即Feeling quite sorry for that,I begin to think about what to do to help. 

  【举一反三】 

  ①另一方面,我将帮着建立英语角,给我们学生提供一个练习英语口语的平台。

   翻译:On the other hand,I will help set up an English corner. I will provide us students with a platform to practice our oral English. 

  可用现在分词作状语将其转换为→On the other hand,I will help set up an English corner,providing us students with a platform to practice our oral English. 

  ②这里的人都喜欢汤姆写的那本小说。

   翻译:All the people here like the novel. It is written by Tom. 

  可用过去分词作定语将其转换为→All the people here like the novel written by Tom. 

  2.运用非谓语动词转换复合句 

  用非谓语动词转换复合句比转换简单句要容易一些,因为需转换的一般是从句部分,这时只需要判断用何种非谓语动词,再把握好时态和语态即可。

   第一步:写出复合句。

   例如: 

  After we had practiced playing basketball for almost two months,we strongly desired to be the winner. 

  第二步:用非谓语动词作状语代替after引导的时间状语从句,practice与we之间为主谓关系,且表示完成,故用现在分词的完成式作状语,即Having practiced playing basketball for almost two months,we strongly desired to be the winner.   【举一反三】

   ①惊诧于他们的熟练程度,我决心要像他们一样好。

   翻译:Because I was amazed at how skillful they were,I determined to be just as good.

   用过去分词作状语将其转换为→Amazed at how skillful they were,I determined to be just as good. 

  ②看到一辆车朝她飞驰而来,我伸出手把她拉了回来。

   翻译:When I saw a car running towards her,I reached my hand out and pulled her back. 

  用现在分词作状语将其转换为→Seeing a car running towards her,I reached my hand out and pulled her back. 

  ③这里曾有一家生产化肥的工厂。它每天释放出大量有毒气体,污染环境。

   翻译:There was a factory here,which produced fertilizer. Every day it gave out a lot of poisonous gas,which polluted the environment. 

  将第二个定语从句转换为现在分词短语→There was a factory here,which produced fertilizer. Every day it gave out a lot of poisonous gas,polluting the environment. 

  ④由于老师的帮助,我的英语进步很大。

   翻译:Because my teacher helps me,my English has greatly improved. 

  用”with+宾语+现在分词”的复合结构将其转换为→With my teacher helping me,my English has greatly improved.