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高考英语写作指导——开头和结尾怎么写
2018年04月12日
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  1.书面表达的开头俗话说万事开头难。其实,一点也不难。高考英语书面表达的开头句一般已为你写好。你要做的是分段缩进重起第二段。注意千万不要接着已写好的首句。一是不美观,二是不便于阅卷老师细览。那么你的起头句实际上是第二段了。开始句根据要求一般可以写的漂亮一点,即要用一些好的套语开始。比如:

  ①Opinions are divided on the question.

  ②Chart 1 shows the daily average amount of time the students of the school spend on different after-class activities. (北京卷)

  ③As is shown on Chart 2, only 10% of the time is taken up with sports activities.(北京卷)

  ④Although the city is modern and convenient, there are still some problems, such as air pollution, crowdedness and noise.(湖南卷)

  ⑤My parents and I are very pleased to have you with us.(全国卷I)

  ⑥I am so sorry that I won't be able to attend the lecture on American history tomorrow afternoon. (全国卷III)

  可是很多考生总在开头处写的不尽如人意,总喜欢搞一些生造的句子或词语来开头,这是一大忌。有些开头可以以套语开始,或以俗语开始比较有力,这样就容易被老师看好。档位在开始时就已定得很高了。现以湖北卷书面表达试题的开始句为例看考生的千奇百怪的错误:

  ①Some students agreed start learning English from childhood.

  ②Some students think: we should learn English from childhood. Because of we have a good memory in childhood.

  ③Some students considered it's useless to slart learning English from childhood.

  ④One group thought its necessary to start learning English from child.

  ⑤In some students opinion, we shall start learning English from childhood.

  ⑥Some of students considered that children at their ages had a good memory…

   2.书面表达的结尾:⑦⑧结尾在书面表达的写作中占有很重要的地位,通常结尾都要算一个内容要求,所以,写好结尾且让阅卷老师有一个完整的印象是十分必要的。好的结尾可以是一段,由一句或几句话组成,能使全文增色。例如:

  ①If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.( 全国卷I)

  ②It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk. (全国卷III)

  ③What's more, some statues of famous people will be set up to encourage us to work harder. Don't you think it a wonderful program? (2004福建卷)

  ④Please let me know if you want me to buy these dictionaries. (浙江卷)

   ⑤By the time mom came back, I had finished the work. Mom praised me, and I felt proud too. (重庆卷)

  ⑥In short, the students have not arrived at any agreement yet.(湖北卷)

   但是,在实际的操作中,许多考生却不知如何来结尾,原本一、两句话或极少的表达就可很圆满地完成写作任务,往往又旁生枝节,写上一些废话,甚至错话,结果因表达不当又被扣分。以2004年湖北卷书面表达试题考生的错误为例,可以看出很多考生是吃力不讨好的。结尾中主要的错误体现在不必要的累赘和废话上面:

   ▲结尾的枝节(不必要的累赘)

   ①In a word, the discussion is broken……

   ②In my opinion, the students should enjoy free, sunshine, flowers, the walks in the beauty of the countryside not except the studying.

   ③Though they have two different kinds of opinions about this discussion, but they are very friendly in this discussion.

   ▲废话

   ①The discuss meeting didn't again a same result.

   ②What do you think, can you tell me.

   ③The discussion didn't get a conclusion. What's your opinion?