三、备考策略:
1。北京卷第一篇作文一般都是看图说话类,并且文体为记叙文,那么应该注重以下几个方面:
记叙文的体裁的图画作文通常分为三个步骤来写:
第一段:总结描述,交代清楚故事涉及的人物、时间、地点,并且写好文章的主题句。
第二段:具体描述,事情发生的原因、经过和结果。
第三段:对事情进行分析:分析句1+分析句2。
写作记叙文体裁的图画作文时还得注意的内容有:
叙述的人称:
第一人称:以当事人的口气,注意好人称,假如你是李华(题目要求),那么你最好用第一人称来叙述,把文章中事情以李华(我)的角度告诉读者,用主观的表现手法,直接叙事。
第三人称:从旁观者的角度来叙述事件,以客观的写作方法,反映事件中各个人物的感受以及见解。
叙述的内容:一篇记叙文应该注意交代清楚事情的始末细节,时间、地点等,一般采用一般过去式。
叙述的方法:
以时间为线索,按照时间的顺序展开(例如北京卷2009年作文,植树活动)。
以地点为线索,以地点的转移为顺序来展开。
以事件的发展过程为线索来展开。
以事物的象征意义为线索展开。
以人物的思想行为以及认知过程来展开。
因此要求考生在写作的过程中宏观思路要明确,重视谋篇布局、合理的划分段落,并且要依据提示准确的把握时态。合理的展开想象,用标志性的语言引起老师的注意,最后通过议论升华主题。
例子:
假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华,利用上周末的时间帮助祖父母安排了去北戴河的旅行。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,叙述你从准备到送行的全过程。
英语书面表达备考策略
注意:
1. 周记的开头已为你写好。
2. 词数不少于60。
Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe. ________
答案:
One possible version:
Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe. On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I searched the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Beidaile, and some hotel information. In the afternoon, I went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there was a long queue. After dinner, I packed into the suitcase the things my grandparents reed, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. The next morning, I went to the station to see them off. Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happy for them and wished them a safe journey.
链接模板一:
As can be seen from the picture(s),there is a widespread concern over the issue that作文题目。But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that观点一。In their views there are two factors contributing to this attitude as follows;in the first place,原因一。Furthermore/In the second place,原因二。So it goes without saying that 观点一.People,however,differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that观点二。In their point of view,on the one hand,原因一。On the other hand ,原因二.Therefore ,there is no doubt that观点二。
As far as I am concerned,I firmly support the view that观点一或者二.It is not only because________,but also because_________.
链接模板二:
描述事件发生的时间、地点:This story happend in(地点)on/in(时间);one day,once upon a time ,the other day,it was in(地点)that the story happened,it was on/in(时间)that.....
举例说明:For example(instance)...such as A,B,Cand so on ;A good case in point is...A particular example for this is...
说明故事主体:This story is not rare...such dilemma we often meet in daily life...The story still has a realistic significance.
提出假设的方式:Suppose that ...Just imagine what would be like if...It is reasonable to expect...It is not surprising that...
描述人的情感:be/feel delighted(happy,sad,upset,nervous,disappointed,surprised,frustrated,satisfied....);to one's delight(joy,surprise,sadness,sorrow,disappointment....);make sb angry(sad upset,happy...);what made sb(most/more)surprised/upset/sad/angry is that...
积累一些过渡性词语:
表示递进:and then ,more importantly,furthermore,moreover,above all,...
表空间顺序:behind,near,beside,far from,in front of,to the left,to the right,beyond,above,below...
表时间顺序:after,before,earlier,later,immediately,soon,next,now,then,first,second,finally...
表示强调:indeed,in fact,surely,without any doubt...
表目的:for the purpose,so that,in order to,in order that,with the purpose of...
表转折:but ,however,yet,on the contrary,in spite of.nevertheless...