在高考书面表达阅卷中，最忌讳的就是大众化的词汇和平庸的表达,要想得高分，就得多用高级词汇，注意遣词造句。

1.三大原则教你正确使用"高级词汇"

原则一："弃旧取新"原则

阅卷老师偏爱"学得晚"的单词，因为使用学得比较晚的单词，可以体现学生"学以致用"的意识。例如，表示"美丽的"形容词，同学们首先想到的是初中词汇beautiful，用高中词汇appealing，ttractive，charming和fascinating等来替换beautiful，可以为书面表达提分不少。

原则二： "短语优先"原则

高考书面表达中，多使用词组和习语来代替一些单词可以起到增加文采的作用。例如，first可用to begin / start with 替换；besides可以用in addition和what is more替换；consider可以用take sth.into consideration/account替换；remember可以用 keep in mind替换。

原则三："避免重复"原则

同学们要想写出一篇好的书面表达，就要尽量避免重复多次使用同一个简单的单词。例如，反复使用should，这时考生应该充分发散思维，灵活地运用短语be supposed to 和had better等进行替换。

2.常用词的高级"变身"

1. devote替换spend

He spends all his spare time in reading. →

He devotes all his spare time to reading.

2. average替换ordinary

I’m an average(ordinary) student.

3. but替换very

The film we saw last night was very interesting. →The film we saw last night was nothing but interesting.

4. seat 替换sit

On his way to school, he found an old lady seated(sitting) by the road, looking worried.

5. suppose 替换should

He is supposed to(should) have driven more slowly.

6. appreciate替换thank

Thank you very much for your help. →

We appreciate your help very much.

7. the case替换true

I don’t think it is the case(true).

8. on替换as soon as

As soon as he arrived, he began his research. →On his arrival, he began his research.

9. due to替换because of

He arrived late due to(because of) the storm.

10. cover替换walk/read

After covering (walking) 10 miles, we all felt tired.

11. contribute to替换 be helpful/useful

Plenty of memory work is undoubtedly helpful to English study. →Plenty of memory work will undoubtedly contribute to English study.

12. round the corner替换coming soon/ nearby

① The summer vacation is round the corner(coming soon). Do you have any plans?

② Li Ming studies in a school round the corner(nearby).

13. come to light替换discover

The family were so pleased when they discovered the lost jewels. →The family were so pleased when the lost jewels came to light.

14. have a ball替换have a good time/ enjoy oneself

After visiting the workshop, we went back to school. Every one of us had a ball(had a good time).

15. come up with替换think of

Jack is very clever. He often comes up with (thinks of) new ideas.

16. set aside替换save

Some students think that they should set aside some of their pocket money for books.

17. be of + n. 替换adj.

The products are of high quality (very good) and are sold everywhere in China.

18. refer to替换talk about/of，mention

The professor you referred to(talked about ) is very famous.

19. lest替换so that /in order that

I wrote down his telephone number so that I would not forget it. →I wrote down his telephone number lest I forget it.

20. be caught up in/be crazy about/be absorbed in/be addicted to替换be interested inHe is caught up in (interested in) collecting stamps.

21. more than替换very

I’m very glad to learn that you are coming in September. →I’m more than glad to learn that you are coming in September.

22. perfect(ly) 替换good/ very well

He speaks perfect(good) English./ He speaks English perfectly(very well).

23. do sb. a favor替换help

Would you please do me a favor(help me) to turn down the radio?

24. in the course of替换during

In the course of(During) the mountain-climbing, please help each other and pay special attention to your safety.

25. the majority of替换most

The majority of(Most of) the interviewees prefer watching TV at home to going to the cinema.

26. consist of替换be made up of

Our class consists of (is made up of) 50 students.

27. be worn out替换 be tired / broken

① After five hours’ non-stop work, we were all worn out(tired).

② My shoes are worn out(broken). Please buy me a new pair.

28. attend to替换look after

29. on condition that替换as long as

30. nevertheless替换however

3.高级句型结构

◆ It句型

① It will be + some time + before…

It won’t be long before humans visit the Mars.

② It is + adj./ n.+ for sb to do sth.

It is very important for us to learn computer well, because it has changed our life so much.

③ It is + 被强调部分 + that…

It is what Yang Liwei has done that encourages us a lot.

Those who like reading extensively say it is through reading that we get our knowledge.

◆ more …than any other 表示最高级

Indian produces more films than any other country in the world.

◆ 名词从句

① It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk.

② My hometown is no longer what it used to be.

◆(非限制性)定语从句

① The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street. It is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.

改为：The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.

② It was quite an experience for us both. I’ll never forget it for the rest of my life.

改为：It was quite an experience for us both, which I’ll never forget for the rest of my life.

◆ 分词结构

① I don’t know about others, but I used to have to work even at weekends doing endless homework and attending classes as well.

② We’ll mostly stay at home in the evening watching TV, playing games, and meeting people.

③ Hearing this, a few people began to run after him.

④ Born in America, Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor.

◆ with结构

① A terrible accident happened yesterday, with nine people killed and almost eighty injured.

② He was carrying a large bag on his shoulder, with a large suitcase in his left hand.

◆ 倒装句

① The library is to the east of the teaching building.

改为：East of the teaching building is the library.

② Although we are tired, we are happy.

改为：Tired as we are, we are happy.

③ He can grow to be a useful man only in this way.

改为：Only in this way can he grow to be a useful man.

◆ 被动语态

① Opinions are divided on the question.

② All classes are taught by teachers with rich experience in teaching foreign students.

③ New factories, houses and roads have been built.

◆ 巧妙的改写

① Only等于no one but

Only Tom passed the exam last week.

改为：No one but Tom passed the exam.

② as soon as …可用No sooner…than… / Hardly…when…代替As soon as we had arrived at the cinema, the film started改为：No sooner had we arrived at the cinema than the film started.

③ have sb /sth / done

The girl was knocked off her bicycle and had her leg broken改为：The girl was knocked off her bicycle and had her leg was broken④ 变换插入语的位置

However, they suggest fees should be charged low.

They suggest, however, fees should be charged low.

I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well you’ve learned Chinese.

This is a good chance for you, I think, to show your singing talent, and how well you’ve learned Chinese.

⑤ 用同位语代替非限制性定语从句

Meimei, who is seven years old, has been learning to ride a bicycle for several days.

改为：Meimei, a girl of seven, has been learning to ride a bicycle for several days.

◆ 其他

1. 注重句子的开头

① 用with复合结构开头

With the sun setting in the west, we had to wave goodbye to the workers.

With his help, we’ve learned how to analyze and settle problems.

② 用非谓语动词形式开头

In order to improve our English, our school held an English contest.

Walking towards the cinema, he met a foreigner.

2. 长短句交错使用(注意：应突出主题句；长句子并非越长越好)◆◆ 相关过渡语

1. 表示时间顺序: first，then，afterwards，meanwhile，later，first of all，finally，at last等

2. 表示空间顺序: near，next to，far from，in front of，on the left，on one side等

3. 表示比较、对照: like，unlike，such as，but，however，on the other hand，on the contrary，nevertheless，otherwise等

4. 表示因果关系: because，for，as a result，therefore，thus等

5. 表示递进关系: besides，what’s more，what was worse，moreover，furthermore，in addition等

6. 表示并列关系: and，as well as，also等

7. 表示总结性: in general，in a word，in short，on the whole，to sum up，in brief，to conclude等